Two interview invites after rewriting the message field. Posting the before…

DeShawn Barr in Military to Civilian

Two interview invites after rewriting the message field. Posting the before and after in case it helps somebody. Before: eleven years of service, various aircraft. After: 2,900 total, 1,800 PIC, 1,600 turbine PIC, C-17 aircraft commander. Same person, same record.

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Grace Hollis

The before version made me do arithmetic. The after version told me. Nobody has time to do your arithmetic.